Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, March 31, 2021
How Bees Make Honey
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Hi Ryder this is T.J. I really like your slide it was very informational the photos fit the descriptions perfectly hi it's just maybe next time you could add a little bit more description and maybe tell us how a queen bee becomes a queen bee other than that the slide was really well made well done
ReplyDeleteFantastic blog post Ryder! I had no idea that bees had a honey stomach! Your title is very clear and explains what the post is about. We can also make them really catchy for the reader too. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteWow this is amazing Ryder! I didńt know that bees hives could be in a bush! Your pictures of the 3 different types of bees is very well layed out. Good job Ryder keep up the great work!
ReplyDeletewow Ryder that told me so much more about bees maby next time you could do one on bears or another animal
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